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Interstices Tanka

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parallels:
for each emptiness,
a fullness;
two worlds divided
by the worlds between
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timeraider's avatar
This is one of my favorite pieces of yours so far. The message works so wonderfully with the choice of words, having repetition in "ness" and then again in "worlds". This is as tight and seamless as repetition gets in such a small space, and it resonated with me.